I really have no words for what you have done with this . You must have looked in my heart and read it there. I thank you so much for something I will treasure always.
You captured my feelings and penned them to perfection. Thank you dear man for this .thank you
You have penned a tribute to the love two people shared. Though death may depart us temporarily, the love we shared during times together will be magnified in the gloryland. I pray for Crystal Rose and her loss. I come from a military town and know realistically the effects of losing those with love so tragically in war. I also know that they do it for us and for reasons like this < to write poetry and so many other reasons. People in other countries are condemned for displaying their emotions like the lot of us do here on a daily basis. Thank you sharing your dedication to Crystal Rose with the rest of the community.
I want to say well done first off. It means alot to me to see someone be touched by anothers words. I read the intro and i can't imagine what she's going through. She must be heartbroken and feel like she's lost half of her soul. That makes a tear come to my eye just thinking about it. i'm sure she appreciates this beautiful poem you have written for her. The next thing....beauitful imagery. I especially like the last stanza. When you think "crystal rose", to me, i would see crystal red flower petals that could break with the slightest touch. A good name for the poem because it may also describe how her heart feels. you done very well with this....do write more....i look forward to reading them.
Wow this was such a beautiful and moving piece. it was so touching and really went straight to my heart as i read it. it was just so inspirational in a way i guess, it shows how everyone is fighting some kind of battle and when you think things have got to their absolute worst you hear or read about someone who's battle makes yours look like nothing. you did such a beautiful job. don't ever give up on your writing!!!! i would love to give you more than a 5 because you totally deserve it!!! this poem goes straight to the heart of the reader.