I really like this poem...My situation is almost same and I can feel your words...
I really like it...Nice job!
and thanx for commenting mine...

It makes perfect sense, and its really, really, good. I'm speechless. All I can say, is keep that you must keep writing :)

Its a great poem!!

I love it !!

DAM YO THIS POEM IS TIGHT HOMZ... IT'S DEEP AND THATZ HOW I FEEL TOO... KRAZY HOMZ...

.:LOKA:.

A poem from the heart are the best kind.
i write in the same style as you
i think this poem exspresses alot:]
and is beautifully written

This is a realy good poem i love it !!!!

I love it

Awwesome poem!! it reaally touched ma heart!!

Heyy check out mine, tell me what u think!!
its called " goodbye hurts"

Great Poem.
It was a little confusing, but it when with the emotion of the poem.
You are very talented.
Don't ever stop writing poetry!
Because it is beautiful.
5/5
:)
-Justina

Great Poem.
It was a little confusing, but it went with the emotion of the poem.
You are very talented.
Don't ever stop writing poetry!
Because it is beautiful.
5/5
:)
-Justina

Wow
amazing poem
very emotional
:)
5/5
great write
keep writing :)

-halie

I really liked this poem a lot.
it was great,
the emotion in it was very evident, and even though it did jump around at times, the fact that it wasn't completely steady made the emotions in it stronger, for the reason that during times when your heart is feeling like this you aren't thinking completely straight Anyway. This poem visualized and embodied well the way a person feels at this time.

The ending i liked the most. saying finaly how you want them to feel your pain, how the words they've spoken have broken your heart.
It was great to read.
Nice write. Good job.

I really like this poem. It feels so sincere and from your heart. I can so relate to this right now, and that means a lot to me to know that someone might have gone through similar situations as I have. Keep up the amazing work.

5/5, of course!