Comments : One of Them

  • 9 years ago

    by The Prince

    Brilliant, this really moved me, your word choice was excellent, and thanks for the comments on my poetry, it means a lot.
    Keep writing :]

  • 9 years ago

    by Kuro

    I feel like i can relate to this alot. thank you for writting it. i enjoyed reading, almost like a flash back to my own past. deja vu almost...

    i liked the rhyme too ^_^

  • 9 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    If only they touched the heart that
    Still beats
    Then maybe they'd feel the warmth
    They defeat

    that was amazing, truly well written and heartfelt. the structure really makes the poem breath taking. But all that aside hun, you don't want to be one of those people, because when all is said and done, they have only succeeded in making you stronger and they still will have to learn the lessons you have. They've put you ahead.