Comments : Goodbye...my lover

  • 9 years ago

    by namless unactive account

    Good poem
    keep it up, sorry to hear this happened

  • 9 years ago

    by Yeka

    Oh my god it's soooo beautiful I love this poem. It came out of the heart (^_^)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Wow that's an amazing poem. Is it a song? If so do u got a beat to it? If not i got one it sounds pretty cool to me haha. Awesome job.
    -vino

  • Aww im so sorry hun. keep your chin up and everything will be ok. great poem by the way.5/5
    **lesthat

  • 9 years ago

    by smiley

    I like it

  • 9 years ago

    by Unamed

    Omg! im sorry it didnt turn out!! i loved ur first stanza! it was very emotional!!!

    i loved this!..great job!

    <3 Aly

  • Ah really nice an something people can relate to =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Your My inspiration

    Omg its great

  • 9 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    This really came from the heart,
    WOW!

  • 9 years ago

    by Asher

    Wow your really good! its better than a five but thats how high i can rate it!

    ((5))

  • 9 years ago

    by The Dark Poet

    Lost love is the worse love i should know ive been through it twice now 5/5 for this keep it up

  • 9 years ago

    by Andrew

    Wow...i got a knott in my throat from that. I really like this.

  • 9 years ago

    by GuRlZ JuZ WaNa HvE FuN

    Hey gurl datz such an interestnz poem i luv it u pt all ya heart n soul n 2 it i cn tell

  • 9 years ago

    by Morphine

    It's truly beautiful.

    You're a very good writer!!!

    all your poems make my insides giggle( in a good way) cause they are AMAZING and BEAUTIFUL!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lost and forsaken

    Wow awesome poem im sorry by the way i cant imagine how much it hurts i dont think i could have survived it but your an amazingly strong personn just for waking up every morning im sorry

  • 9 years ago

    by Edward Elric

    Great poem :O
    Almost made me cry... ~.~

  • 9 years ago

    by Lost and forsaken

    Im soooo sorry this happened i dont think we will ever forget our loves or ever fully heal from what the took when they left us that we will always be different from what they took and what we took from them im sorry that it happened to you im still recovering myself been 9 months and 18 days since she drove away still holding my heart

  • 9 years ago

    by Lost and forsaken

    Great poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Travis

    Wow, this really shows a lot of emotion
    I can really relate to this
    this is really good
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Wow. that was a very amazing but unique poem i loved it!!