Comments : Goodbye...my lover

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy

    Good!

  • 15 years ago

    by xX the left behind Xx

    Aww..this is sad..but it's an awesome write..

  • 15 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    The only critique I have is the spelling mistakes.
    Otherwise, it was beautifully written, and you could tell it came from the heart, with true emotions.
    Beautiful 10/5 Lol.
    Lonely xXx

  • 15 years ago

    by Obscura

    That was so beautiful and passionate i really thought it was really good i was sad reading it because it reminded me of something but it was good

  • 13 years ago

    by IML

    I like this poem. its really from the heart. ive felt that way sometimes too. ty for commenting on one of my poems a long time ago. i never did return the favor.
    thank you. :)
    ian