This is such a sweet poem. I loved reading it. Really cleverly written to. Well done, keep it up you're really good. :)

This poem is AMASING! I love how you made it into a story it was so sweet. Great job :). . .

~Yvonne~

I LOVE this poem/story. it reminds me soooo much of my boyfriend and i. we liked each other for two years and couldn't tell each other and then we finally did and now we're happy together. anyways, great poem. i love this. you could have added more to the story though. but its still great! keep it up! 5/5

How innocent and cute , Well done. Thanks for commenting on my poem. X

Oh I love this alot , it sounds more like a story to me :) Very sweet :x nice work .

Aww, this was really cute and sweet. I enjoyed how you made an actually story from the poem. It was very nicely done. Nice work and keep writing!

I really like this poem
U did a great job on this one
Keep up the good work =)
5/5

When i started reading it i thought "oh boy, another childlish love poem" but then ..."oh boy, this poem is so awesome, romantic and cute"

i love it alot and sorry for the fast judgment

I find this poem quite cute. It is truly like so any love stories out there. You have really out done your self. Keep on writting

Awe.. dat's soo cute:)

I love it.
Thank you so much for the last comment you sent me.
=D
Keep writing, your great.
Check out some of my other poems please, i need to know what you think.