Very powerful, and the repitition worked wonderfully in this poem, it flowed perfectly and the rhyme scheme worked aswell, great poem for a two year writers block. Sorry about your mother, may she rest in peace.

It was excellent i mean i could feel sense ur emotion! iam sorry, lifes not fair but ur pain will not b in vain. my rest in peace now and foreva

So powerful! I hope you too are doing well. It really sucks loosing some one. I think about how I'll get to see my Uncle John again some day and that helps me get by.
God bless you sir.

Very good im sorry for your loss!
ya know my great grandmothers name was olga too lol
thats funny well hope you are doing ok :)