You did this excellent. Your imagery was bright and right on. Beautifully done
5/5

Gr8 work....quite inspirational...
i like it lot..

Cool..!!

Ooh. This is very pretty. It paints a picture, and the image, I feel, is beautiful. Also, I like how you wrote such a great piece to this form, as it looks like it would be difficult. Great job. 5/5

``Briana

The opening lines were amazing and the imagery portrayed was beyond perfect. Definately a 5/5 for this piece, I felt as if I was watching it and not reading, a hard thing to pull off as a writer. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

Very well written and in a form that I have come to love.

Refreshing poem :)