Comments : Standing Strong; Breaking Down. [collab.]

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    Beautifully written :]

    5/5

    hehe

  • 9 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Great write, except that it seems to remind me of me. i am now stuck hiding behind this wooden cane of mine and watch as doctors stare at my tests and tell me it is muscular and skeletel. my right leg keeps me awake at night, and i now have to use vicadin to keep me concentrated on work at the pizza shop. but it is great to see that you put out the poem.
    I dont mean to be a jack, if you know what i mean.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well i can feel the sadness and the feeling of beeing in that postion when you ahev to fake your smiles for others, !!

    i think she is a very good poem nicely writen
    but i think it need more rhyming in it ,

    great job

  • 9 years ago

    by Austin

    I was very surprised. This was very well written. An excellent poem. I loved the feel of it while I was reading. If gave a very dramatic and sad feeling. Almost like someone was sacrificing their self. I don't know the exact details of the collaboration, but if I were you I would do it again. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Zara Baines

    Really nicely written and very clever, ireally enjoyed it

    check out mine if you get a chance

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Again, what a wonderful write. You both do collabs together very well. The more I read this poem the deeper and darker to me it got. You did a wonderful job portraying that mood in this poem. Very sad. Great job.. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is very good i loved it
    well done