Comments : Jack and Jill of Need

  • 9 years ago

    by Evil One

    Wow, good poem; very creative

  • 9 years ago

    by Iris

    This is WAY deep. and true. if only everyone will see that the devil can bring you down for what you think is only a little thing. i would give it higher, but the highest is 5...This was totaly awesome!!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Always and Never

    Wow, this poem is so true on so many levels. i loved the way you took a sweet nursery rhyme and made it into something deep and dark. greed is a demon that will drive people to kill. great poem. 5/5. one of my favorites.

  • 8 years ago

    by meganmarie

    WOW. amazing. beautifully written. such meaning and depth yet dark and twisted. i love how you twisted the nursery rhyme of jack and jill. it was definetly portrayed well.
    --lovedroughtmelody

  • 8 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Amazing turely amazing. 100/100