Aw the first stanza is beautiful. I loved the rhyming words. :)

Lol, okay the food stanza made me giggle and smile. ^_^ That's cute.

I liked the poem itself but I still say you need punctuation more and such. XD But that's just me. :)

I enjoyed it, I'll give it a five. :)

Great write. The flow was really good. First stanza you need to capitolize the one I that you missed, the stanzas were kind of odd I'd say. Some were 4 lines, one was 5, and another was 2. Really odd, but still you managed to keep a nice flow somehow. Great work, Trav. (: It's a wonderful write by you! 5/5