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by Crystal Rose Blooming Aug 21, 2008
Sadness, depression /
A rose grows
By an unknown grave
A lone bud
White as snow
As if mourning the passing
Of a man once known
*6 lines / syllable count 3-5-3-3-7-5*
Beautiful and very powerful. The image of one lone bud on a grave so sad.
by Ingrid de Klerck
A beautiful poem with so much said in those few syllables.
Indeed sometimes there is no one to visit the grave of one who passed away. To think of nature taking that place is a very comforting thought.
by Beautiful Chaos
I really enjoyed this piece, I think you did an excellent job, it is just beautiful. You say so much in so few words, this is one of my favorite pieces I have read as of late, keep up the great work.
Simple but beautiful, so much emotion in such a short verse.
by Rachel RTVW
Great job on this form. A deep and meaningful message in a few short lines! Good imagery.