The passing (Shadorma)

by Crystal Rose Blooming   Aug 21, 2008


A rose grows
By an unknown grave
A lone bud
White as snow
As if mourning the passing
Of a man once known

*6 lines / syllable count 3-5-3-3-7-5*

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  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Beautiful and very powerful. The image of one lone bud on a grave so sad.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A beautiful poem with so much said in those few syllables.
    Indeed sometimes there is no one to visit the grave of one who passed away. To think of nature taking that place is a very comforting thought.
    Excellent poem:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I really enjoyed this piece, I think you did an excellent job, it is just beautiful. You say so much in so few words, this is one of my favorite pieces I have read as of late, keep up the great work.

  • 9 years ago

    by bubbles

    Simple but beautiful, so much emotion in such a short verse.

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Great job on this form. A deep and meaningful message in a few short lines! Good imagery.