Comments : The passing (Shadorma)

  • 9 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hullo Crystal your poem is simply beautiful,a simple yet complicated poem. It was so well written and speaks so much in so few words.
    Very well done.

    Grant

  • Crystal This simple poem captivated me with its beauty. It left me wanting more each time I read it. Somehow it has special meaning to me, as if it were a meeting place for two souls once in tune still seeking each others presence for comfort. I loved it ...5/5...Jim

  • 9 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    This is a very emotional poem...I think the wonderful thing is that few words could express deep feelings..
    I liked it sooo much..
    Keep up the good work;)..

  • 9 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    U are a goodhearted person..i can see that from reading your poems..
    u are such a good writer...5

  • 9 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Simple but deep. Well written for the format that you were writing in. A gravesite from the view of a rose, all that's left of ourselves after death.

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Great job on this form. A deep and meaningful message in a few short lines! Good imagery.

  • 9 years ago

    by bubbles

    Simple but beautiful, so much emotion in such a short verse.

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I really enjoyed this piece, I think you did an excellent job, it is just beautiful. You say so much in so few words, this is one of my favorite pieces I have read as of late, keep up the great work.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A beautiful poem with so much said in those few syllables.
    Indeed sometimes there is no one to visit the grave of one who passed away. To think of nature taking that place is a very comforting thought.
    Excellent poem:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Beautiful and very powerful. The image of one lone bud on a grave so sad.