Wow this was so great! I loved the way you worded it. Simply amazing.

It was at that moment I watched my love walk out,
When I truly realized what life is about.
Without my love, the one for me,
I could not even begin to see,

^^^My favorite part. The flow of emotions from line to line compliment the rhyme sceme wonderfully. keep it up
5/5
~Forever Broken~

This struck me in the heart. I was at a time in my life where i truly struck a deal with the devil. Very dark place. But i got up and kicked the devil out of my life. I expect you to do the same. Don't let it hold you down. Excellent write, dark, but it has a moral in the end. Walah