Extreem Sadness

by Mister 47   Aug 26, 2008


Devastated heart, broken dignity, dead faces
Fallen roses, shattered petals, deserted places

Crushed heads, pieces of flesh, empty eyes
Tempted souls, choking breath, bashful lies

Don't walk away, when the sky is falling
Don't walk away , when heart is dying

With out you, I am like rust on an old blade
A poison to humanity, a memory that will fade

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  • 9 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Very well penned. liked the emotions of this poem. wonderful to read!

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    Hey strong poem man, very deep and emotional. one thing to fix is in the first stanza, "desert" should be " deserted"

    but other then that 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    Extreme**