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by Mister 47 Aug 26, 2008
Dark, fantasy /
Devastated heart, broken dignity, dead faces
Fallen roses, shattered petals, deserted places
Crushed heads, pieces of flesh, empty eyes
Tempted souls, choking breath, bashful lies
Don't walk away, when the sky is falling
Don't walk away , when heart is dying
With out you, I am like rust on an old blade
A poison to humanity, a memory that will fade
Very well penned. liked the emotions of this poem. wonderful to read!
Hey strong poem man, very deep and emotional. one thing to fix is in the first stanza, "desert" should be " deserted"
but other then that 5/5
by Lauren Crandall