Comments : Extreem Sadness

  • 9 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    Extreme**

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    Hey strong poem man, very deep and emotional. one thing to fix is in the first stanza, "desert" should be " deserted"

    but other then that 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Very well penned. liked the emotions of this poem. wonderful to read!