Comments : Pieces of me

  • 9 years ago

    by Deana

    Ingrid,This is truly beautiful,It is a beautiful thought that our spirit continues in the beauty around us....just don't plan on going anywhere too soon,we need more poetry first LOL.

  • 9 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "The wind that touches your skin----"
    `Are the dashes REALLY needed here? I don't see a point in them really.

    First stanza - Really good, I love how you were speaking to everyone and not just one particular person.

    "You will find little pieces of me in my poems,
    that showed all my hopes and fears"
    `I love these lines a lot.

    "Where my seeds of love grew safe and sound
    developing into beautiful strong trees,"
    `Uniquely said! I loved how you said that the seeds of love grew into beautiful strong trees.

    "------trees bringing forth seeds, that will allow the message of love to be spread eternally. "
    `Hm, unique format I thought. Here's the dashes again.. that I'm guessing connect with the last stanza? Strong ending, nevertheless. It was really good (:

    Overalllll, really good write. It's very sweet and touching. It was amazingly written, very original poem. Well done. 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mister 47

    As a poet i can not but to but my vote with you , in everyword your said ,

    as poets , we always ,stay on earth by our world and the pple we touched,

    but i would put these words in rhyming style if i was you for more impact
    (jsut my opignion)

    great one and unique

  • 9 years ago

    by mandy

    That brought tears to my eyes. It really touched my heart and made me look back at how I lived my life but also the life ahead of me. Beautiful! Wonderful job, 6/5 - if there was one! :P