"The wind that touches your skin----"
`Are the dashes REALLY needed here? I don't see a point in them really.
First stanza - Really good, I love how you were speaking to everyone and not just one particular person.
"You will find little pieces of me in my poems,
that showed all my hopes and fears"
`I love these lines a lot.
"Where my seeds of love grew safe and sound
developing into beautiful strong trees,"
`Uniquely said! I loved how you said that the seeds of love grew into beautiful strong trees.
"------trees bringing forth seeds, that will allow the message of love to be spread eternally. "
`Hm, unique format I thought. Here's the dashes again.. that I'm guessing connect with the last stanza? Strong ending, nevertheless. It was really good (:
Overalllll, really good write. It's very sweet and touching. It was amazingly written, very original poem. Well done. 5/5.