Comments : Breached

  • 9 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Thought provoking. It could have done without all those filler words though....wonder why someone would nominate the poem and not even bother to leave you a comment on it. I think with a little tweaking, it could be much better.

  • 9 years ago

    by meganmarie

    This was a veru intreuging poem. i love it. beautifully written. deep, emotional and powerful. goodjob.