You have an amazing talent with flow and the right words. It's a sad poem, but it's a god one. I personally really liked the second and third stanza, and the last two lines.
This poem gave me shivers. I hope you keep writing amazing work.
Krystal.

Excellent write! The rhythm was perfect as also the rhymes.The content was very interesting ,I guess we have all felt like things were a dull gray at times. an excellent job.