Comments : Sand

  • 9 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    This was beautiful, I loved the flow and the imagery. Definitely a piece I can relate to really well right now. You've got tons of talent; 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by RussianRendezvous

    Great metaphor, great flow. Good job on sticking with the theme and tying everything together. You romanticized this to just the right extent. I love it : )
    5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by thehangman

    Excellent use of language, another great thought provoking poem!