Comments : Your Ideal

  • 15 years ago

    by thehangman

    I know what you mean. Some times you just wish everyone would leave you be and let you decide things for your self.

    Keep up the great writing!

    -Andrew

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    I love to read a poem that the emotion is so very evident...Very well done. You can hear just a touch of anger and frustration. Very well put together. Flow and rhythm was great!

    Now as a mom I have to say...I know it is frustrating wanting independence but you are young and even though it is hard to see it right now you need guidance. communication is the key! good luck.