Comments : Crystal and Mahogany

  • 9 years ago

    by Ignoris

    This is beautiful work. The imagery is fantastic! The flow is good and relaxed, a pleasure to read.
    Thanks for the comment on 'free to be me'.
    Chin up, Eleni

  • 9 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Outside there's a dusty rain
    and inside only golden shadows"

    You spread so much passion and emotion in your imagery. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by The Prince

    Captivating title
    Excellent imagery
    Flawless flow.
    ^^
    6 words that sum up this poem
    Well done :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Interesting choice for a title.

    The flow is good, the lyrics paint a picture. It is almost as if I'm there from time to time. I loved the opening. It sets the mood for the rest of the poem.

    Very well versed. I enjoyed it.

    5/5