Comments : Just Like That

  • 10 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    This is Great and im proud to be the first to comment it.
    i like the
    "Stop. wait" thing. you made it work really good :)
    great job again.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww very very cute poem : ) i'm glad to hear that happy endings still exist ! i loved the repetition of the "freeze" it brought the reader out of the picture you just painted and had us imagining a new one 5/5 !

  • 10 years ago

    by HollyNichole

    I absolutely love this poem. it's so sweet and just... real. the way you describe everything, really lets the reader "see" whats happening

  • 10 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awwww this is a really really really cute and sweet poem. I love the whole "Stop, wait" thing it just made me want to read it. Wonderful work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I stopped and wait and frozen y this piece soo strange one ,i never seen one like this ,

    i normaly like traditional ones but this one made me want to get my cloth of and freeze !!^_^

    and i loved it litleraly who new you are able to create such lovely ones ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by Paiger

    Beautiful, I love the idea of this poem, its very original. You paint very clear images in the readers mind.

    I will never forget the quote :
    "Stop.
    Just wait.
    Freeze your self in that position.
    I know I don't have to worry about losing you.
    But just in case I ever do,
    I want to remember you
    Just like that. "

    It makes me think of my own actions, I really honestly think I've done that, just taken a good long look to think, I want to always remember this.

    Definitely one of my favorite poems I've read in a long time. <3

    5/5 +