Comments : It's a thin line

  • 9 years ago

    by dirtyhands

    Wew great rym,,short but nice,,

    "I hate her so bad
    but I love her"

    this part makes it wierd,,

    but it good i wish i could write poems like this,,

  • 9 years ago

    by XxFailedxForgottonxX

    Nice. Love the ryming. a little short but its still good = ] 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by music4pumpkins

    This is great. shortly descriptive, lovely writing using simple words and rhymes to describe so much emotion. i normally have to write an essay to get the same point across.

  • 9 years ago

    by nicole

    This has a melody to it as u read, as if you were writting a song. i like it

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I like the structure and the rhyming is great.

  • 8 years ago

    by Emily

    I love it. it is short and sweet, the point is expressed beautifully. You're very talented, keep up the good work. You are definitely one of my favorite authors.