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Wew great rym,,short but nice,,
"I hate her so bad
but I love her"
this part makes it wierd,,
but it good i wish i could write poems like this,,
Nice. Love the ryming. a little short but its still good = ] 5/5
This is great. shortly descriptive, lovely writing using simple words and rhymes to describe so much emotion. i normally have to write an essay to get the same point across.
This has a melody to it as u read, as if you were writting a song. i like it
by Sweet Disposition
I like the structure and the rhyming is great.
I love it. it is short and sweet, the point is expressed beautifully. You're very talented, keep up the good work. You are definitely one of my favorite authors.