I really love this poem great job! i really liked especially the last two lines.

-Gracie

Thanks gracie .glad u liked it :)

I complety agree with the whole poem. Great Job!
10/10

Nice job, you showed your emotions well.
Chin up, Eleni

Mashallah! Your poem was very beautifully written. I loved every word of it. The flow was nice and I was happy to see that you did not enforce rhyme in every line. too bad your wings have failed you
so easily it seems their words have fooled you
and as always the ground was the first to catch you
and reality was the hand to slap you in the face"
These words were filled with alot of emotion and I feel like you put the words in my head in a poem!
"eventually love will kill you
no matter how hard you try
love can and will find you
after all we're all supposed to die"
These words were really clever. I give you 5/5 And I will add it to my faves great job!

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