Sucide

Mannnnnnn you must think of this alot
I feel your thoughts of suicide in all your poems. don't do that you'll just piss god off and he'll just send you back to a worst life
so hang with this one and make the best of it aleast you tried and thats all anyone can
expect of you

I sit down feelings emptyness
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An awkward first line but I think I know where you are coming from.

thoughts racing through my head
thinking finally this is the end
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I liked these lines. It made me feel like it's done, I don't have to deal with you are this anymore.

where the pain and suffering end
where the agony of this life ends
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These were my favorite lines. Very intense,

at last i get up and stand on the chair
grab the rope and fit it around my neck
I feel a teer run down my cheek
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It made me feel like you almost regret putting the rope around your neck.

and as i step off the chair i feel the rope tighten
i have one thought the whole time i hang there
. . . . . . . .why didnt i do this sooner
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I really like the way you ended the poem.