Comments : We The People

  • 8 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    WoW! The minimalist power and authoratative voice of this poem belies the meaning I took away from it. Very touching and powerful.

  • 8 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Wow! This is a powerful and thought provoking piece. Excellent job!

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay
    you did an awesome job on this poiece. This should get a lot of people thinking.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Wishmaster

    SWEET! Like it a lot!

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I'd pick my favorite part but by the end it was the whole poem lol You said a lot in these small well worded lines, very thought provoking. Great job!

  • 8 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a good theme to write a poem. Thought provoking indeed. Significant write.

  • 8 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    I like the effeects used in this piece, few words in each line but all says so much clearly. It was in the last stanza that really got me and tied the emotion.
    Lovely piece.