WOOOOOOOOOOOOO That was excellent (lol) It really was. I got an impression from the first stanze that was erased at the end. I could envision all the actions of what was goping and in the end I found myself happy for both for the people in the poem, even though they don't exist. This is a 5/5! I also have poems of my own and I would greatly aprecaite it if you rated mine and commented on mine as well. Thanx, and keep up the great work!
I had to hold my breath throughout in anticipation of the ending . It made me realize that when we sometimes think that love had diminished and there is no hope (when we are ready to throw it over the edge) that it is truly really still there but has just been blanketed for so long that we have forgotten about it .But when push comes to shove we are awakened by our true feelings and not willing to throw it all away .
This poems originality will make it unforgetable !!!
Awe, oh my God, Holly... that made me teary-eyed! What a beautiful piece this is, truly spectacular. It tells a true and vivid story, and I can see it so clearly in my mind's eye. You did a beautiful, beautiful job... I'm awe-struck. Did this ever win? I would imagine it did, it's so good! 5/5