Comments : DeJa Vu

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well i like how you penned this poem down. I can feel the hidden anger within you. I also like the idea that you wrote this in a free verse and all your thoughts is being expressed freely. Sometimes it's just funny how all those promises that we believe to be true are nothing more than just words.

    Btw I think the title u meant DeJa Vu(Then again it's ur poem u need not change it if you feel that's how you want the title to be)

    Excellent Job
    5/5