Comments : Moving on to a better place.

  • 9 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wow! You imagery really came to life. I understood everything it was saying, everything it meant. This is definitely a great poem about life. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Gem

    Bravo! Really really beautiful.

    I can't think of anything to critizise, haha. It was perfect apart from little thing "Glistening" is the correct spelling =)

    Excellent piece of poetry!