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Wow! You imagery really came to life. I understood everything it was saying, everything it meant. This is definitely a great poem about life. 5/5
Bravo! Really really beautiful.
I can't think of anything to critizise, haha. It was perfect apart from little thing "Glistening" is the correct spelling =)
Excellent piece of poetry!