This is the most romantic poem I have ever read in my whole life. It was like reading a fairytale dream filled with magic come true. Your words were hypnotic and mezmorizing, I forgot everything else in the world around me as I was reading it.

Wow this was terrific.. i really loved it.. i agree with Sasha and TJ.. i really focused on the poem.. and really got into the loving feel of the poem. you expressed love extremely creatively and uniquely. well done.
5/5

Suggestions;
`First stanza, second line.. capitolize i.
`First stanza, last line..capitolize i.
[& the several others you didnt capitolize throughout the poem]

`Wonderfully written overall. This piece was beautiful. The second stanza I enjoyed very much I thought that you did a wonderful job with the imagery part of the poem. Some parts I find to be cliche.. "with a sword and armour ill be your shining night." - We've all heard that.. I found it to be unoriginal, but hey.. love poems tend to be cliche, so I'm not going to bash you for it.. lol. But if it was my poem i`'d probably cahnge that line.. :]
Simply put. Decent write.
5/5.

I love the way this one is written. The imagery and the vocabulary just enrapture the audience and the AABB rhyme sceme just makes it flow right off the tongue. Love it. 5/5

Your poem is really beautiful... I am astonished... The imagery is awesome and the poem is filled with emotions...
don't think it lacks originality, though... the line with the "shining knight" is a classic... but romeo and juliet is also a classic ;)

sweet write... :)

5/5
*isabel*

Awww. Really, really sweet.

I'll be the spark that you wish to ignite
and never have the fire burn so bright
no longer will our time feel so tight
cause one day you'll be here with me tonight

Favourite stanza.
Very powerful and cute.

Wonderfully written too.
Easy flow and kept my interest.

Welldone

5/5