Comments : Goodbye, My Love

  • 9 years ago

    by HvN

    AW.. so sad.. but beautiful in a way, you're so good at writing!

    5/5

    stay strong ! =]

  • 9 years ago

    by H E Losey

    What happened to the rhyme scheme in stanza four? After that stanza it seems both the rhythm and the rhyme go off.