Comments : Always Remember

  • 8 years ago

    by Amber

    This poem brought tears to my eyes. It was beautifully written and everything was great about it

    "Always remember and never forget,
    If ever you need me don't hesitate,
    I'm here to listen, to give hugs, and what I can,
    For you I'll always be willing to wait."

    Those were my favorite lines. It brought a nice strong ending, and wrapped everything up nicely.

  • 8 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The sincerity can be felt in these words you have expressed in this write, Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us…may peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday.

    sadaddy

  • 8 years ago

    by Jack

    Thank you.

  • 8 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I dig your poems. I can relate with much of the pain but i was mostly the one who was causing it.I posted one a while back that you might like.
    Keep writing your soul speeks the truth.

  • 8 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Sorry. the poems called dawns of change.

  • 8 years ago

    by abullettotheheart

    I bet all your poems are for one boy.
    it's funny they lack to see who really care about them. i don't maybe I'm wrong but it sounds like your hearts broken.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This brought a tear to my eye as I've felt this way about many people and they usually let me down. WOW.
    I liked the stanza
    "You deserve so much better,
    Than the hand that you've been dealt,
    Always remember you're important,
    No matter how different it is from what you've felt" and the last line "For you I'll always be willing to wait." Sums up the poem in just that line, 5/5. Em xx

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was a very sweet poem. I think some people need to be reminded of their worth and importance to you. Friendship is a wonderful thing and I'm glad you and this person are so close. I know I would be lost without my friends. Very loving piece and full of happiness. Nice work Nik :)