Shooting Stars

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jan 7, 2009


My mind takes place in another dimension
with voices at a table holding a convention.
I'm off shooting stars out of the sky
as clocks sprout wings and learn to fly.

One star falls and I wish for more money.
As the second one dies I wish for a honey.
More and more fall to the earth's cold ground
reappearing in a clutter called the lost and found.

The sky is falling, at least that's what they say,
but we're still all here at the end of the day.
Each day a new person drives me up another damn wall
as they look me in the mouth like a gift horse in a stall.

They said to eighty six my head because it's too much,
but I say they can't throw away what they can't touch.
The newspapers speak of the guy that killed time.
His lawyer says he has no reason and no rhyme.

I guess I'm not the only crazy one in my head.
They say things will get worse and dark ahead.
Can't see how that's possible, it rains cats and dogs,
if things got any worse it would rain horses and hogs.

Everyone prepares for the next day with a dry run
while I let my mind take over and I sit shotgun.
Running like a robot, programed to do things right.
Screw one thing up and you're shut down for the night.

Riding the day away trying to get to skid row,
just to separate from people and everyone I know.
They say it's all over, but simply I turn a blind eye.
I'll be here as long as I can shoot stars from the sky.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Different way of speaking out your mind ... and very intriguing also... loved the metaphors you have used ... i loved the starting part more... it was more captivating ... and some lines really caught my attention...

    well penned... beautiful write...

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    You just let your poems run wild the way it should be and let others interprete it. I like the nonsensical imaginary that your have poured out from your head to create this piece.Though the things may not make sense but it was unique in a way that you have combine everything together and make it rhyme.Well i hope you could understand my comments as much as i can understand ur poem lol But u did an excellent job 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Thats an excellent poem Jen and a very clever one too i might add, and yeah each person seems to have a different take on what his or her perfect ideals are and at the end of it all we all turn to dust.
    Good one Jen and a most enjoyable and different read
    5/5

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by oddi tea

    I love it. Really crazy insane, and I love the way you incoperated all the old saying in like "raining cats and dogs' and 'Looking a free horse in the mouth'. It also made me laugh at the horses and hogs bit. Thats pure genious! Great job and good luck on the contest! 5/5