Perfect title for a wonderful portrait of an erotic relationship.

Well,to be honest, I really didn't understand much of it except it has to do with emotions? Am I right? I like how people have such a big vocabulary, [haha]. I'm not much for big words, as I'm a blonde [go figure]. But somehow I liked how you pulled together this poem. Its very interesting and keeps you wondering about the meaning.

5/5

"Maybe it was that touch
The one that burned through skin
Setting every sense on fire
Demanding submission"
- The stanza made me grin, love the idea of it and meaning behind it.

The entire poem is well written. I enjoyed the read. Very relatable for those in love OR in lust. Either way it's emotional value is something that human beings desire multiple, multiple times through-out life. Only a few are so strong though, this seems as if it's one of the very strong emotional connections needed with the body.

Jenn
What a wonderful poem. Excellent Imagery and word choices.
Take Care
(((hugs)))
Cindy

So elegant and sensual at the same time. Your choice of words throughout the poem is great. I admire the beauty that every stanza holds, it memorable, deeply heartfelt and captivating in so many ways.

Overall, to me this is truly a superb, flawless write. I can't express how much I enjoyed in every greatly penned line.