That ring tone I made just for you,
now it never chimes a melody
barren cold, desperately alone
awaiting what a heart forgot.

^This was my favorite stanza, i thought you made it modern, using "ringtone" and I like the way you tied it in with the emotion.

I also enjoyed the ending

Burned up all the remains
and forgotten the ashes -
to blow away in a peaceful hell.

^The last line especially.

All in all it was a nice read. Good work.