Comments : Rot in Hell

  • 8 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Nice. Short. Powerful. I liked that you had an ABAB rhyme scheme, which I rarely see anymore. One thing, though, in my opinion, I think the last line should read 'I embrace this death' as I just think it would flow just a little nicer, but even though, the piece does fine as it is. A good piece, in my opinion.

    Brad

  • 8 years ago

    by Brittany Michelle

    I agree! With you a 100%