Comments : Wakefulness & Dreams

  • 9 years ago

    by Nee

    Oh you posted it ^^ I'm so heppieeeh.
    I think I said what I wanted to say..
    this was just it love it and love it =)

    But the clock isn't ticking, its skipping with time
    There's fear in your movements, with hope you can't buy

    Did I mention how much I love those lines??? well..I just love them..amazing write

    Keep it up friend :]
    Nee xxx

  • 9 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Salam alaikum sis', remember me?

    Hehe, that was a great poem. Very honest, almost real - when you read it. Almost as if if I had felt those feelings, I would've written those words. Keep up the good work.

    Thought I'd stop buy give you a 'read' and salaams hehe, haven't read any of your stuff in a while. Hope you're doing great sis'. Take good care of yourself.

    Your brother and fellow poet,

    Thuggy = ).