Comments : Why Mummy

  • 8 years ago

    by RachiBubbles

    Very good job, lot of meaning. and good word choice.

    5/5

    keep up the good writing!!

  • 6 years ago

    by lonerbabe

    Thats really good and gets the point across from the view of the child it doesn't make one sad though which i think is what it lacks but still really good