Comments : Surrender

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie what a sad yet beautiful poem. You pieces always flow so nice.

    Sweet churns of the moments gone lost in the tears
    Through trials that heart had to face
    Caressing the soul is a time long ago
    That shattered and died in disgrace

    How sad this stanza is. How many things we miss from the happier times in our life.

    Dark haunts in the empty heart lying in waste
    The battle scars deep and unkind
    No longer a strength to hold to its fates
    No life left in heart, soul or mind

    How many people feel this way. They feel dead inside. Love scars run so deep.

    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Seems you are on a roll with great poems. Though sad but i loved it all the way. You surely have a very unique way of writing and you are very talented indeed. Keep writing

    all the best and take care