Comments : The things school is too scared to teach.

  • 8 years ago

    by Gizmo

    I love the title it really is a unique one, but you could've held onto that idea the whole way through, you forgot the school part in the poem, so you should have possibly changed the title.
    to something like...' the things they never taught us' 'no one evcer tells you'

    overall its a good poem i like the repetition on the bottom and top however you have a spelling mistake hope should be how.
    anyway pleasure to read xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Whoa! I can relate. I feel so painfully alone everyday. You express this type of stuff better than I do. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Very meaningful, true and deep piece. Good job, 5/5. Em x