Comments : Where Walks This Man

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I surely could read this one again and again, very nicely written

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    wow this is so sad and intense.

    Where walks this man without a life
    Once young and free in front of him
    Was such a journey he could stride
    To places he had never been
    But shackles hold him to the ground
    Constant pain from things he's done
    Now sits among the cornerstone
    Without a heart a soul or sun

    What imagery this brings to the mind. How sad and lonely.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy