Memory

"Two hearts beating quicker,
tugging at tired heart strings.
Holding, pulling closer,
wrapping fingers together."

^^This is beautiful, I found this opening stanza to be adorable, so sweet and moving that it pulled me into the piece, I really liked the use of "tired heartstrings."

"Sugar and salt,
two opposites attract.
Blending together helplessly,
colors blinding to eyes."

^^I found this stanza to be really unique, I love how you used sugar and salt, I think that worked really well here.

"Running to your mind,
tingles racing down nerves.
Finding the missing jigsaw piece,
a perfect fit in my memory. "

^^I'm not to sure of this..it seems weak, whereas the rest of the poem is incredibly strong throughout.

That being said, I enjoyed this.