Hold me not against your heart
frozen is your touch
I should have known from the start
you used me as a crutch.

^^ These lines really hit me hard....we all fear to meet with someone like that: a user.
I think you two made on hell of a poem:)

A splendid job, bravo!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

A splended poem and the blend of two writers is excellent. Users are the worst kind of people to have in your life. They almost "suck" the life out of you. Good job to both of you. 5/5

1st thank you so much for commenting on my poem "True Love Lines".. I really appreciate it..
And honestly, your poem is more than great.. it's full of emotions with great rhymes..
"And now looking back on it
I can see us through their eyes".. my favorite lines.. keep it up.. good luck..

Bashar Zayadeen