MaryAnne,

You worded this so beautifully, I could almost see it all in front of me. It certainly made me wish to visit this tower myself too!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Ive never been to Chicago long enough to experience the beauty of it.. but it is a very gorgeous city. I loved the very vivid, clear description of being in the Sears Tower.. It makes me want to visit it someday and look over the big city just like you did. I'm sure it was quite the fun experience, and beautiful as well. The St. Louis arch is just as amazing.. I recommend you visit that someday! The overlook of St. Louis is gorgeous!

Well done.. great job putting the reader in YOUR position, making them feel this moment very clearly.

5/5.

Though I've never been up the Sears Tower, your poem took me there. Your poem vividly evoked the feelings and anticipation I would have going up on the elevator and finally seeing the panorama on top. Brings me back many years ago when I went to the top of the Prudential Building in Boston.