Jeannie you both have penned such a beautiful piece here. The flow was perfect and the imagery amazing.

Wonderful read !!!!

Loved it Jeannie & T.J ... you write beautifully together.

Awesome awesome awesome! I can't even tell who wrote what.
Perfect flow and absolutely flawless imagery.
I never thought a poem about a cheetah could be so beautiful...great job you guys!

That was amazingly beautiful. I couldn't even tell who wrote which line, which is the beauty of it. The whole thing was amazing. Well done! 5/5

Bri~