Comments : Softly Leaving

  • 9 years ago

    by AnCi

    Another amazing poem! I loved it how you finished every part of the poem with repeating the same line.. But at times i can feel that your rhymes were a little forced..

  • 9 years ago

    by dontlookpassmytears

    Thank you for the comment I will try and work on not forcing my ryhmes but again thank you.