This is indeed and sad but true write..telling the pain that is behind a lot of peoples smiles. And how we appear brave and strong..but inside we re trying to survive. LOL I loved reading it..coz it was so well expressed. My fav poems are about "hearts" and "smiles!".. (they reveal the true us). Will keep reading ur great writes..
This is very sad, but VERY good. It seems incredibly well thought out. Thank you for your latest comment, (on my latest poem). I added a few stanzas to it and made it more clear as to who it was about. I started to write it, but I couldn't think of anything else to write so I just ended it. I liked what I had so I just posted it anyways. Anyways, very good poem!
Aww... wow... this poem is AMAZING! I knew from the title that I would love it and relate to it... I feel like I'm the "she" in this poem... It's almost as if you've written my feelings for me... This poem is wonderfully written! Not only do I love the imagery you've created but the poem's structure and flow is perfect as well! I LOVE IT! Great job :)
6 years ago
Well I have a few things to say about this poem. Firstly it has immaculate word choice as well as imagery. Next there is not a single line through which you don't feel true emotion. Third, The flow is fabulous. Fourth, if I were you I would change each and ever day into each and every day; but maybe I am wrong. Fifth, keep up the terrific work, because I give this a 5/5!