Comments : Broken smile

  • 8 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    Love it, it shows a lot of emotion... keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    This is indeed and sad but true write..telling the pain that is behind a lot of peoples smiles. And how we appear brave and strong..but inside we re trying to survive. LOL I loved reading it..coz it was so well expressed. My fav poems are about "hearts" and "smiles!".. (they reveal the true us). Will keep reading ur great writes..

  • 8 years ago

    by xx

    This is very sad, but VERY good. It seems incredibly well thought out. Thank you for your latest comment, (on my latest poem). I added a few stanzas to it and made it more clear as to who it was about. I started to write it, but I couldn't think of anything else to write so I just ended it. I liked what I had so I just posted it anyways. Anyways, very good poem!

    Cherish.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kianna

    Wow..kinda describes me..most of the time.
    Very sad but very good..
    Keep up the good work
    [5/5]
    ~KiKi

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... wow... this poem is AMAZING! I knew from the title that I would love it and relate to it... I feel like I'm the "she" in this poem... It's almost as if you've written my feelings for me... This poem is wonderfully written! Not only do I love the imagery you've created but the poem's structure and flow is perfect as well! I LOVE IT! Great job :)

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Well I have a few things to say about this poem. Firstly it has immaculate word choice as well as imagery. Next there is not a single line through which you don't feel true emotion. Third, The flow is fabulous. Fourth, if I were you I would change each and ever day into each and every day; but maybe I am wrong. Fifth, keep up the terrific work, because I give this a 5/5!