Comments : A Prayer

  • 8 years ago

    by Blissful

    Joe, you don't know how much this means to me. I'm lucky to have just amazing people in my life during these tough times. This touches my heart and soul and I thank you for it. <3

  • 8 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I'm well too tired to go into depth, but I did love this.

    "Hold hands with those whom grieve
    and erase the sorrow that lies within."

    Wow. I may have misunderstood this, but for me the idea of the deceased holding hands with the people they are leaving behind is..wow. Powerful. I'm sure this could be taken in a different light, eg: The writer is comforting the people mourning. BUT I like my first thought. :)

    The ending fits perfect with the title.
    You ended it like a prayer and that added a little extra.

    Atm this was the perfect poem for me.
    Well doooonee :D