Comments : Daisies and Blue Jeans

  • 8 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Oh how I loved this. It reminded me of the simplistic nature and the love for it. Very nice write.

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A happy image your words portray, dancing in daisies. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "frolicking in the garden
    hair blowing in the breeze
    bare feet, torn jeans
    a musical treat flutters within the trees"
    `Impressively written, you have some awesome word choice here in which really helped out with painting a vivid image for the reader. This was absolutely well written, "a musical treat flutters within the trees" - That's something so unique, I've never heard this before..

    "picking daisies along the way
    weaves a halo of delight
    places it upon her head
    giggles float among fluffy clouds
    as she dances like a princess
    in daisies and blue jeans"
    `Perfectly written! A beautiful image, someone running through the fields picking daisies.

    :]
    A very beautiful nature write.

    5/5.
    Temps (Beyond a Poets Mind)

  • 8 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good imagery, it really paints a picture of Spring. Beautiful!

  • 8 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    This is such a simple but fun poem! i love the imagery here : ) i definitely voted for you : ) keep it up!!

    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Knee

    I really enjoyed this piece..I barely enjoy poems about nature, but you've created a great image here.

    picking daisies along the way
    weaves a halo of delight
    places it upon her head

    Those lines are my favorite..you penned such a lovely imagery :)
    Well done and congratulations on the win.

  • 8 years ago

    by Lu

    Congrats on the win Angela, very deserving!

    Sweet read !!!!

    as she dances like a princess
    in daisies and blue jeans"
    ^^^
    Loved the imagery!

  • 8 years ago

    by Sourav

    I love the writing. It's very well written. Beautiful description and lovely flow! You deserved to win!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Ohhh, that's nice. Reminds me of the days I used to make daisy chains and run around the garden.
    I like this piece because it has an optimistic attitude, the torn jeans on the girl makes it look like she's troubled, yet her dreams keep her going with hope to someday be a princess like in the fairytales.
    great write... keep it up!

  • 7 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I have a niece named Daisy and she's such a little angel...I could see her running in the garden when I read this...is that silly? I mean I know we all come to our conclusions and see our own visions but how am I going to place my own little girl in your poem? HAHA Seriously, I think it's truly special when you have the power to that to a reader...this piece is special Angie! I came back because I was so into it at lunch today I wanted to read more!! :) This may be my favorite yet....I don't see her much so it was nice to be reminded of your beautiful spirit. :):):)

  • 7 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    Awesome!

  • 6 years ago

    by Natalie84

    This is still my favorite! I think I need to add this to my favoirte list. I love to reread the special pieces that make me smile :):):)

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Absolutely amazing! :) love and summer time is such a wonderful inspiration! love the flow 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Natalie84

    :) still makes me smile! Miss you!

  • 2 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Oh me gee I have apparently read this poem many times!! Lol!!! I love!!!! STILL!!! And I did think of daisy again when I read it!!!! :)